I like the poem,but dont you think there is more about the merchant family,yet the pope.I think you should think about it.
I love your poem, but I think you could've written more of them
Although your poem is great, maybe a couple more would be better.
Because the Medici family was so important in the renaissance, you made a great poem about them.
If you want to talk about the Medici, you'll need to use more than six lines;)
I like the poem,but dont you think there is more about the merchant family,yet the pope.
ReplyDeleteI think you should think about it.
I love your poem, but I think you could've written more of them
ReplyDeleteAlthough your poem is great, maybe a couple more would be better.
ReplyDeleteBecause the Medici family was so important in the renaissance, you made a great poem about them.
ReplyDeleteIf you want to talk about the Medici, you'll need to use more than six lines;)
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