I'm going to India. I don't know what pass I will take. I'm going to take the Brahmaputra River. I think I'll call Pikachu and see if he wants to come with me. "Hi is this Pikachu," I said
Yes and who might this be," said Pikachu
"Bo-Yo, any way will you come with me to The bay of Bengal."
"Yes," He said.
"Cool ," I said
Any way better get to the Brahmaputra River. I took the Lamborghini that I got for my b-day to the Himalayas and down to the river. Surprisingly Pikachu was there first helping load the boat. When I got there I transformed into an Indian settler. Then I asked for a ride. They said sure but I would have to bring my tooth brush, sleeping bag, and a washcloth. Then I helped get everything on the boat . Helping put every thing on the boat made me hungry. At least I wasn't that guy who was famished. We got on the boat and took of. Pikachu kept saying we forgot someone like "Bo-yo" oh my. I forgot to tell him. When we got to the Ganges river I saw a small town. "Maybe we can get some privations." We stopped and got some stuff. I looked back at the boat and I saw bandits. Nowwwwwwww. They burned down the boat and we walked the rest of the way.
THE END
It didnt end that way boyo! Remember the boat that time travelers inc sent us. or at least we thought but it was flying so i figured it was from them.
ReplyDeletePerhaps a smaller font would be easier to read, and indentation. I like how often you use dialogue.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Okami, the font is HUGE!! I can't read it that well, but I do like the dialogue and the post overall. :P
ReplyDeleteI agree with Okami and Arson: your font is too big!
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