I was by the Nile when a boat came out of no where. It looked like a Viking boat. It was as big as a mountain. and as wide as crater lake. I was so paralyzed I stood there and gasped for air. They offed me a ride to the grand palace of King Tut. I asked why and they said
"because the royal king likes to meet his guests.
"OK" I said.
As soon as I got there King tut said.
"Welcome,Traveler. Sit"
I stammered to say I can't, but two guards came over and forced me to sit down. They had little clothes on and a spear in their right hand. One was short and witty and the other was tall and talked like a parakeet.
"Today we have a Feast."
So we got up and walked to the balcony and looked at the sun set.
I thought he might be trying to manipulate me so later after we left and he sent me to my room. I didn't want to miss my next assignment so I climbed out the window.
Why did you climb out the window?
ReplyDeleteNice word choice! It flows better than it did before you took your time and edited it!
ReplyDeleteI agree with dshr. Much improved.
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