I woke up to the rush of traffic as the trucks got ready to cross over the seven mile bridge that connects the Florida keys to Miami. This is the sound I would miss hearing as I packed up. I walked out side and closed my tourist map shop. I have lived hear ever since I had started working for the C.I.A. I went to my brothers house Slim Shady. I peeked in the window and saw him packing up also with the same brochure on his desk.
I froze. I started to become
groggy.
I usually tell me brother about ties things,but today i didn't.
Ever since I was a kid I could shape shift. My brother can speak any language, can do any job and can shape shift. When my brother was three he hijacked a plane and flew all the way from Russia to the U.S.A. My mom and I moved here after this incident and found my bother by accident.
I went to our mom Lady Shady. She got rich off of making sweet potato fries.when i got there she gave me some sweet potato fries.
bon appetit .I went there to say goodbye and then went to the airport and waited for my next assignment.
Bo-Yo Shady
Cool post bro! I liked the wording in the beginning. It also had the history of you (and me) which I liked. Great post!
ReplyDeleteWOW!The way you wrote this in the beginning is awesome.Nice use of words.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the description about the rush of traffic. sweet potato fries, mmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Great post.
ReplyDeleteNice, just remember to highlight the writer's secret. Awesome description and intense graphics in my head, good luck on the next post
ReplyDeleteNice post! Were you and you brother exasperated when you were three or did you guys follow Slim half way around the world? I really liked your wording and describing somethings about your bro's life as well as your own! I agree with you Sarah- sweet potato fries are sweet, nice!!!!!!!!
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ReplyDeleteI really liked the beginning. The hook is right on and pulled me into the story.
I am excited to see where you take the story.
DSHR
I love sweet potato fries. I love them almost as much as I love a good grammar checking!
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